Thank you for your lovely comments. :) I still don't know how I feel about having written it, but I'm glad that some people are enjoying it at any rate. :)
The integration of the scenes was something that just struck me. As soon as I had "there is no us", I was like "... did I swipe that from the gazebo scene?". So I went and rewatched and was like "Yes, yes I did, but that is also perfect!"
And then I had to re-watch the school scene, too. :D
My, my, watching Otalia videos as research is just such a chore... ;)
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Date: 2009-09-29 02:06 am (UTC)The integration of the scenes was something that just struck me. As soon as I had "there is no us", I was like "... did I swipe that from the gazebo scene?". So I went and rewatched and was like "Yes, yes I did, but that is also perfect!"
And then I had to re-watch the school scene, too. :D
My, my, watching Otalia videos as research is just such a chore... ;)