Oh, okay, sweet! Thanks for the feedback! I was wondering if the things you were talking about were thematic or something but I'm glad it's characterization detail and stuff. I really did enjoy throwing in little bits and pieces like that to help clarify who's who and keep validating that since I'm not using names.
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Date: 2009-09-29 06:26 pm (UTC)Glad that it worked! :)