Lol, well it was the little things. Like, "*The* scene. The one all those internet people are going to freak out about. The scene that will be everything that you couldn't do on the show.", "She smiles at you, but it's not a real smile. There's just barely the hint of a dimple." and, "You almost laugh because your new character's just as fucked up as you are."... Apparently I missed those (amongst a few others) the first few times around. I was too busy leering, lol! But once I fully comprehended what I was reading, I was very impressed with the way you added just enough detail tailored to CC and JL to really make the emotional impact resonate.
And, yes. Very, VERY good at fanning those flames! :P
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Date: 2009-09-29 04:32 pm (UTC)And, yes. Very, VERY good at fanning those flames! :P