I'm on page 325...I wouldn't be so upset by the first one you mentioned if there had been, oh, I don't know....SOME BUILDUP?!?!?!? It just kind of...happened. Maybe even a comment or two during Summer about her smile...the way her hair framed her face...anything.
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Date: 2005-07-18 04:39 am (UTC)