I don't know who I love more: you for writing this awesome piece or ripptyd for practically forcing you to write this. Okay, I'm picking you because the writer has to get her due. I've already thrown love over ripptyd's way so you're getting all the love and praise tonight. :p

Seriously, I really enjoyed reading this. It's perfect and I love that you're writing from Crystal's point of view. I got chills during the kiss. Very nice.

Please write more.